Reflection

The two essays I chose to put on my blog were my memoir and my Scarlet Letter Essay. These were my two favorite essays that I wrote, and I believe they were written very well. My memoir tells the story of how I recieved my first pet and what my life was like with it. My Scarlet Letter Essay tells the reader about the main symbol in the novel and how it changes over time. Three things I learned about writing from this class are what's important, what's not important, and what to add to make a piece better.
I did a little bit of revising for my memoir. I changed a few words and made my sentences sound clearer. I only had to change one thing in my Scarlet Letter Essay and that was to write out a number instead of using a real number.
I looked at the essays of Chris Coldwell, Jessica Garner, and Meredith Alewine. I liked Chris's essay on Sept. 11 because it made me want to keep on reading and it also had a good last sentence. I liked Jessica's nature walk essay because it was very descriptive and kept me entertained. I liked Meredith's Scarlet Letter essay because it had accurate information.